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| Task 1 好词好句 | ||
|---|---|---|
| 原文表达 | 推荐升级 | 使用场景 |
| shows | illustrates / depicts / demonstrates | 描述图表内容 |
| goes up | increased / rose / grew | 描述上升趋势 |
| goes down | decreased / declined / dropped | 描述下降趋势 |
| the number | the figure / the proportion / the percentage | 描述数据 |
| we can see | it is evident that / it is clear that | 引出观察结果 |
| big increase | significant rise / substantial growth | 描述大幅增长 |
| stays the same | remained stable / showed little change | 描述稳定趋势 |
| in the year 2020 | in 2020 / during the year 2020 | 简洁表达年份 |
| Task 2(学术类)好词好句 | ||
|---|---|---|
| 原文表达 | 推荐升级 | 使用场景 |
| big problem | pressing issue / formidable challenge | 描述严重的问题或挑战 |
| suggest some solutions | propose viable remedies | 提出解决方案时使用 |
| people use too much | the excessive consumption of | 描述过度消费或使用的现象 |
| protecting the environment | safeguarding the environment | 环保话题的正式表达 |
| immediate actions | prompt measures / swift action | 强调需要立即采取行动 |
| very important | of paramount importance | 强调某事的重要性 |
| more and more | an increasing number of | 描述数量增长的趋势 |
| in the end | ultimately / in conclusion | 文章结尾总结时使用 |
| Task 2(培训类)好词好句 | ||
|---|---|---|
| 原文表达 | 推荐升级 | 使用场景 |
| complain about | express my dissatisfaction with | 正式投诉开头 |
| nobody answer | my calls have gone unanswered | 描述联系不上 |
| quick reply | prompt response | 期待快速回复 |
| I want to say | I would like to suggest | 礼貌提出建议 |
| very sorry | sincerely apologize | 正式道歉 |
| thank you very much | I would be most grateful | 正式表达感谢 |
| I am writing | I am writing with regard to | 书信开头 |
| I hope | I look forward to | 书信结尾期待 |