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Task 2: 环境类话题
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In recent years, environmental protection has become a pressing issue that requires immediate attention from governments and individuals alike.
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This essay will discuss the main causes of environmental degradation and suggest some solutions to address this problem.
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There are several factors contributing to the deterioration of our environment.
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Firstly, the rapid industrialization have led to increased pollution levels in many cities.
主谓不一致:industrialization 是单数,应使用 has led to
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Factories release harmful chemicals into the air and water, causing irreversible damage to ecosystems.
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Secondly, people use too much plastic products in their daily lives, which results in severe plastic pollution in oceans.
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To tackle these issues, governments should implementing stricter regulations on industrial emissions.
情态动词 should 后应接动词原形 implement
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They could also provide incentives for companies to adopt eco-friendly technologies and sustainable practices.
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Furthermore, public awareness campaigns can encourage individuals to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation and recycling waste.
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In conclusion, protecting the environment is a collective responsibility that requires efforts from both authorities and citizens.
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By taking immediate actions, we can ensure a sustainable future for generations to come.
action 作为"行动"讲时通常是不可数名词

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